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Thursday 19 August 2010

Week 4 The biggest wind farm support or stop


The largest wind farm in southern hemisphere will be built in south-western Victoria. Energy Company AGL announced that the 140-turbine wind farm would be built under a $1billion deal by 2013. Can you imagine it? In order to give readers a more impressive picture, the editor posted an approximate 1 minute video (from Ten News) with the online news. The video offers the scene of a wind farm which is beside ocean, full of wind turbines settled, rotating. Following by is the Victoria Premier John Brumby’s speech on a media conference (I assume), claiming the importance of the wind farm: It is essential for not only environment but also economy. It will generate enough energy for more than 220000 homes. I will reduce annual greenhouse gas emissions by about 1.7 million tones and create up to 400 jobs during construction. About 30 people would be employed to run it once it is completed. The speech has strengthened the reliability of the news and added color. Although it is a bit boring and the content is already presented in the text, the video is the first reason for the success of the news story. The significance is the second. As climate change is the hot-debated since last year's Copenhagen climate summit, renewable energy is more and more of people's interest. In Australia, wind is one of the most affluent renewable energies.
Another factor is the conflicts. One conflict is between the necessarily of the wind farm and the law and policy. The scheme has come across difficulties although both the opposition and the government claimed to support. It was clashed over since it must be built under law. According to the Coalition’s policy, wind turbines must not be built within 2 kilometers of homes without the owners’ approval. But as Coalition planning spokesman Matthew Guy said, it has received community support. If I were this journalist, I would interview the residents who live near the place to confirm if they really support the scheme.In addition, to vary the voices and add color to the article. Make sure people’s voice to be heard is journalists' role.
The other is the different voices of the parties. The presentation of different voices to balance and enhance the journalist’s angle. In the last paragraph, Denis Napthine, the Coalition member for the seat of South West Coast said the government should ensure the wind towers being built by Portland manufacturer Keppel Prince. Law and policy are administrated by human, money the main drive of everything!

See the original news: http://www.smh.com.au/environment/southwest-wind-farm-the-biggest-20100812-121j0.html
(photo source:http://www.liveinvictoria.vic.gov.au/image-gallery/live?SQ_PAINT_LAYOUT_NAME=image&5968_result_page=7)

Presentation PPT

Hi there
I've uploaded the presentation PPT in Slideshare.com, check it out if you are interested. The link is here
http://www.slideshare.net/3278818/melody-bao-week-2-presentation
So how was it?

Mel

Saturday 7 August 2010

Week 3 Holden plans Commodore engine on 85% ethanol

It is well-known that oil and gas are definite. It is also a undeniable truth that the emission of transportation has caused pollution and climate change. But the situation is getting worse and worse. What if humans run out of fuels? What if 2010 is the end of the world? I'm not scaring you!
Although renewable fuel standard engines are not new inventions, they are seldom applied. While many car companies such as Toyota implemented sustainable plans, Holden recently plans to announce a Commodore that can run on E85, which is a combination of 15 percent of petrol and 85 percent ethanol.

check out the online news story in SMH website: http://www.smh.com.au/environment/energy-smart/holden-plans-commodore-able-to-run-on-85-ethanol-as-standard-20100802-112ef.html

The introduction gives the most important information including the basic facts: who, Holden, what, rely on alcohol as car fuel, where, Australia, why, against dwindling world oil supplies. The present tense indicates that it will happen soon.
The next few paragraphs show the details of the fuel, by comparing with the traditional fuel. It's cheaper and "green", which can reduce greenhouse gas emissions. Then the article introduces how it will be applied nationally-- the E85 refuelling station will be built and the cars will be sold in Melbourne. After concluding the main idea,Berry park introduces the development of the boi-power car and why it failed. The second last paragraph also mentions the drawback of the E85 fuel car, which is it cost more fuel than the normal one. It concludes with more information: which engines will apply the fuel.

Basically, the article follows the pyramid style and structured concretely with complete information. The news angle is also clear, which is the application of renewable energy and reduce greenhouse gas emission. However, it is one-sided. If the journalist can interview expert, or maybe interview some consumers to see if they are willing to use the new fuel. But it looks more like a soft news piece, which functions to promote the new car, because all the information come from the Holden company.